White Album end: a question of lust (and spineless losers)

As I commented in Kabitzin’s excellent retrospective I found this show a bit of a chore to sit through at first but burning through the last five episodes in the space of an afternoon was better than the weekly episode viewing I initially tried. I quite like the open ending with its promise of more to come later in the year but also felt a twinge of guilt: the show is not without its flaws but I feel that it was given a bit of an unfair beating. More than anything I want to be annoyed at the series for the right reasons and want to understand why it took the approaches it did.

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Can I be bothered to dig up the eroge adaptation issue again? Quite frankly I can’t see the point. The idea of branching narratives and periodic storyline choices in a VN -> indecisive protagonist in a strictly linear plotline of a TV series ought to be obvious by now, or at least I hope so. This isn’t the area where the show falls down – rather, the frustration viewers felt was the price of presenting the characters in the light they were; not so much the question of whether the faults lie in a poor adaptation or the act of recreating the original material complete with those faults.

On the latter point: I’m at a bit of a disadvantage in that I’ve never played the game so can’t say whether my criticisms stem from the anime’s screenplay or the story it’s based on. I guess you could argue that an adaptation has the advantage in that regard: it has the chance to put things right and make improvements. If, say, the lead is an unlikeable jerk, why not make him a bit more likeable in the anime?

The main problem I had with White Album is indeed the fact that Touya is an unlikeable jerk. I’d be interested to learn if he’s like this in the VN because from my point of view I want the protagonist to show a bit of backbone and honesty in such an interactive first-person setting. I’d feel a bit awkward if I were to play the part of a serial liar and wouldn’t be able to identify with him since I’d be shouting “I wouldn’t do that, you idiot!” at the screen, which wouldn’t be nearly as rewarding as playing from the point of view of the heroic type who does the right thing, beats the bad guy and gets the girl in the end.

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Touching from a distance/further all the time…

I suspect that White Album is indeed the story of What Happens To The Lying Numpty. Perhaps the moments of infidelity are bits and pieces of alternative routes tossed in, perhaps not. The story is however one of a relationship being tested by outside influences, so the offers of ‘a bit on the side’ are all intentional parts of the story. I’ll bet a White Album that would result from the likes of me playing the game would be boring as hell though: Touya rejects serious offers from the other girls and sets himself on a Yuki End, no matter what. That would lack all that juicy soap opera-ish gossip and “will they, won’t they?” dorama though, wouldn’t it?

I think the viewer is supposed to dislike Touya: his irritating knack of talking himself into a jam is a necessary part of moving the plot along. There’s a risk in that this goes too far; it is indeed a price to be paid in that sense. Some people may have been put off this show entirely because its lead comes across as an unfaithful, spineless ass but to look at it another way, isn’t this quite brave of the writers and, ultimately, isn’t it a bit of a refreshing change?

I might not want to play the part of someone whose philosophy is out of line with my own in a VN but from a more detached perspective as a TV viewer it was a different matter. It really did feel like a soap opera in that I wasn’t so much sympathising with the characters as observing their behaviour with morbid curiosity, watching to see what would happen next; since the VN format actively encourages you to think and feel the same thoughts and emotions as the characters themselves I was a little surprised that a story derived from that format succeeds while doing the opposite.

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As a result of all this I wound up watching this in a somewhat cold and detached fashion, rather than getting all sentimental but even so, it was a nice exercise in watching a realistic-style drama in an interesting setting. I’m just old enough to have some recollections of the mid 80s and things like reliance on landline phones work well in favour of the pervading themes of disconnection and awkward moments where, far from being star-crossed lovers, they frequently miss each other. The colour palette’s muted range of greys and greens didn’t make it exactly engaging I suppose; nor did the occasional dips in animation quality later on.

Nevertheless I was actually impressed with its artistic ambition: in a way similar to true tears back in the day it makes an effort to show the characters in as lifelike a light as possible, for better or for worse. In between the superficially dull shades and bits of outsourced animation was a story that felt closer to a live-action drama show than the anime we’re familiar with these days. Could this fact be part of the reason why White Album went against the grain for some?

There is of course the issue of those text overlays, which I loved at first but they ultimately felt a bit superfluous. They stated the obvious and came across as the attempts at pseudo-intelligence I feared they were, rather than being the sophisticated and helpful bits of character insight I hoped they might be. More often than not the thoughts and little agendas were already obvious to the viewer, if not to the other characters.

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I love the little details, like the fact that the cans are AKG K-240s, a model widely used in recording studios of the time

Despite what I’ve said here I didn’t really dislike any of them – Touya was a fool, Haruka and Eiji were a bit odd but otherwise they came across as quite realistic and believable. The problem really was that I never empathised with them, instead paying more attention to the portrayal of the almost-famous and the resulting problems that arose from the in-between situation of being neither yet in the world of celebrity nor any longer in the world of the ordinary. This situation of Yuki’s is a bit of a rarity in anime and the way that Rina came across initially as the bitchy diva but ultimately proved to be her heroine and role-model was a pleasant surprise as well.

For all the differences in technology I daresay the nature of the idoru industry, and the ways in which it affects the lives of those within it, hasn’t changed one hell of a lot in the intervening couple of decades. Sure, mobile phones have got smaller, the music sounds a bit different and fashions have changed but the feelings and situations translate well. I’m sure it’ll still be the same in the future too, which I think is what Shoji Kawamori was driving at.

7 thoughts on “White Album end: a question of lust (and spineless losers)

  1. I think you might be right about the viewer is supposed to dislike Touya, but the problem I had with the series was that I really didn’t like Yuki. As far as I’m concerned, Yuki takes at least half the blame for their relationship problems, I soon got tired of her sad, lonely, poor virgin girl act, Yuki could have just as easily snuck over to Touya’s place to pay him a visit. I know it’s supposed to be the 1980′s with no cell phones, but they did have taxi cabs.

    The only two female characters in white album I found interesting were Rina and Yayoi. But, by the end of the season, I became disappointed with Rina, she kind of knew about the whole twisted web and decided to do nothing. Now, Yayoi is a different story, I really would like to get inside her head, does she or doesn’t she feel anything for Touya? When she saw another girl (Mana)in Touya’s room she should have been happy to see Touya focusing on another girl and not Yuki, but instead she snatches Mana from his apartment, I’m sure Mana wasn’t going to die from her cold.

    I’ve said in one of my previous reviews that I would have liked Touya to be played as a total scumbag jerk. Have him sleep with every woman, Rina, Misaki, Haruka, Yayoi, Mana, and even the Sakura-dan group, then let Yuki decide whether she wants to steal him back or let all the girls go School Days on Touya.

  2. Given White Album’s roots I was fully expecting Touya to be an indecisive idiot, but I certainly wasn’t expecting him to be quite as much of an asshole as he eventually turned out to be. I certainly agree that we’re supposed to dislike him, but that’s always a risky path to tread and I’m genuinely not convinced it worked here. While his behaviour created a lot of the show’s drama I suppose, it equally detracted from the strengths and weaknesses of other characters, as every other major player in the series ended up posted on a scale labelled “how stupid I am compared to Touya”, and needless to say most of them lost handsomely.

    As far as leads go, Yuki wasn’t much better really, a damp squib if ever there was one – If we were supposed to be rooting for a happy Touya-Yuki ending, then it isn’t working.

    This disappointing major pairing is a shame really, as there are some interesting characters on show here – Haruka needs to be fleshed out beyond just being some weird girl as there should be an interesting story there, and Rina is a definite bright light and a fascinating character in her own right; I’m still not entirely convinced that she’s an outright heroine though…

    Still, this series has proved to be good fun for all the drama, and that 80s setting has made a refreshing change from the anime norm these days of characters picking up their cell phone every two seconds to communicate. Doubtless come Autumn I’ll be spending another dozen weeks shouting “Touya, you idiot!” at my screen. :D

  3. @Chris: I quite liked Yuki actually. She was a bit wimpy at times but there were some scenes where she’s visibly trying to be tougher emotionally and more professional, but yeah…they would’ve got it on if she hadn’t fallen asleep! *facepalms* I wouldn’t under-estimate the risks they’d be running in trying to maintain a normal relationship in the public eye though – what about that incident involving Rina and the cigarette machine?

    @Zyl: indeed. Well spotted! It seemed appropriate given how the series is set in 1986 iirc.

    @Hanners: I’m hoping Yuki gets her act together in the second season – now she’s effectively ‘made it’ career-wise she can concentrate on getting that numbskull of a boyfriend in line. If she finds out about his antics things would get even more interesting! It certainly was a risky path making a pair of leads who aren’t necessarily engaging, which highlights how there’s a fine line between bravery and foolishness in the writing. I’ll definitely come back for more, if only because I don’t dislike Yuki like so many people seem to!

    @Smankh: there’s an even better shot of Yuki’s headphones in one of the episodes, but I’ll be damned if I could find it. I love the little bits of attention to detail in this series though.

  4. I definitely think we are supposed to dislike Touya. Just the text-thought alone serves to highlight his faults, whereas if we didn’t get to read his thoughts we wouldn’t see his “Goddess of the Day” crap and think so poorly of him. That’s probably why Yuki hasn’t dumped the chump yet; she can’t see what we can see and so she just assumes Touya is being a bit weird because of the situation.

  5. I think it was a good anime. Somewhat similar to the story of I”S. Touya is so hopeless even Yuki too. Yeah touya was a total idiot…can’t resist the seductive charm of yuki’s manager but it can’t be helped.For a man like him, he only wants to wander around questioning himself if he is suitable to be yuki’s boyfriend. Also the lies,…he keeps telling lies when yuki is calling him whenever someone is hanging around to his apartment.

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